“Loneliness is the poverty of self; solitude is the richness of self.”—May Sarton
Mid-April, brutal hot, spring in the Blue Ridge. I’d pedaled twenty miles already, absorbing the pastel colors of emerging redbuds, dogwoods, and tulip poplars. The formidable hill was scorching my quads when the man—white-haired, overalls, rounded belly—called out, “Hey, buddy, want a cold drink?”
I stopped, dismounted, shook my water bottles like maracas. “Think I could grab a refill?”
“Sure. And I’ll get you a so-dee pop, too.”
I relinquished the bottles, declined the soda, and he vanished through the screen door.
The homestead was typical of Appalachia in southwest Virginia: shotgun house, backyard abutting a hardwood forest, clothesline, garden plot strategically angled for maximum sunlight in those unforgiving hollows.
After he disappeared, I noticed a strange movement near a solitary porch chair. The floor appeared to be flowing, lava-like, in a trippy, psychedelic manner. Clambering over the wooden slats and surrounding the chair were hundreds—perhaps thousands—of honey bees.
“Here’s your water,” he said upon his return. “And a cold drink.” He’d either misheard (or simply ignored) my earlier refusal. But in that heat, I must admit, the knockoff Sprite was perfect. The sweetness, the cold. Ambrosia. He continued, “I see you discovered my buddies.”
“Yes, sir,” I said, venturing closer to the bee horde. “What’re they doing, exactly?”
He approached the perimeter, tipped his own soda, wiggled his wrist. “Keeping me company.” Droplets splattered the floorboards, momentarily dispersing the insects. “I first did it to attract raccoons. Sit out here in the evenings, watch them rascals waddle up like they own the place.”
Perplexed, I said, “For what reason? You try to pet them?”
“Lord, no,” he chuckled. “They’d bite the daylights out of me. I just watch.”
I nodded. “That must be nice. It’s so peaceful out here.”
“Me and my wife lived here nearly sixty years. After she died a little while back, it got kind of lonesome. So, sure, it’s nice. I enjoy their company.”
A beautiful and heartbreaking image. This lonely old man tucked in the mountains, missing his wife, fabricating companionship. I imagined dusk in that hollow, spring peepers peeping, masked creatures venturing from their oak den each night, the man gently bouncing in his chair…waiting. Did he converse with them? Name them? Recognize specific personality traits, like an Appalachian Jane Goodall? How long did they stay? How long did he?
Until the last ringtail had scurried off, I bet.
“So what about the bees?” I asked. “You ever get stung?”
“Naw, they don’t bother me none. They’re so gentle,” he said with grandfatherly admiration. “Tickle your skin when they crawl on you. Sometimes I lure one to my hand, raise it to my face, say, ‘Hey, Mr. Honey Bee, you got the purtiest little eyes.’ He never pays me no mind, just uses his teensy tongue to lap that sweetness from my wrist.”
I finished my drink, thanked him, found myself smiling. His affection, his demeanor, it was contagious.
“You come back and see me,” he said, raising his can in salute.
*
I crushed the final ten miles, preoccupied with a fantasy from adolescence: of becoming a hermit, living in an isolated cabin, vanishing from society to be alone. No, not to be alone—to find solitude. Because solitude, I now realized, was far different than loneliness. Loneliness was sad; solitude was contentment.
Loneliness breaks the spirit, so goes a Jewish proverb. But the bee man had concocted a method to defy that maxim, to rectify his loneliness. Or at least keep it at bay. And I admired that.
What form might my future loneliness take? Sitting on my own porch in the mountains? Writing if my fingers still worked? If my mind still did? I envisioned not just sprinkling soda at my feet but pouring it all over my body, longing for the bees to fully envelop me.
I imagined it as pleasant, peaceful: fuzzy insect legs tickling my skin; little “tongues” lapping nectar from my arm hairs; “purty little eyes” paying me no mind.
Absolute solitude…and yet, companionship. Something odd to strive for, perhaps, but the entire time I pedaled home, my smile never wavered.
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Scott Loring Sanders is the author of two novels, a short story collection, and the essay collection Surviving Jersey: Danger & Insanity in the Garden State, which is a finalist for CLMP’s Firecracker Award for Best Book of 2017. His work has twice been chosen for Best American Mystery Stories, noted in Best American Essays, and published in a wide array of journals and magazines ranging in scope from Creative Nonfiction to Ellery Queen Mystery Magazine to North American Review, among many others. He teaches creative writing at Emerson College in Boston and at Lesley University in Cambridge.
Artwork by John Gallaher
22 comments
Phyllis Reilly says:
May 17, 2018
Wonderful story. You took me on a journey I never would have taken if you hadn’t written this simple,magical and beautifully crafted story.
Thank you
Phyllis Reilly
Scott Loring Sanders says:
May 19, 2018
Thanks Phyllis. I appreciate you reading it.
sue granzella says:
May 20, 2018
So lovely. Makes me have more hope for the future.
Scott Loring Sanders says:
May 20, 2018
Well thank you very much. Hope for the future is a good thing I’d say. Much appreciated.
Joy G-Friedler says:
Jun 20, 2018
True story? Can I use it to teach my memoir class? Forgive my ignorance -good fiction reads like memoir. Good memoir reads like fiction. This is really wonderful. Love how it takes an abstract and makes it so humanly concrete.
Scott Loring Sanders says:
Jun 20, 2018
Yes, 100% true. By all means, use it in your class. I’d be happy for you to use it. Thanks for reading and commenting.
katherine soniat says:
Jul 5, 2018
This is wonderfully concise and moving! A real task. Hurray.
Scott Loring Sanders says:
Jul 8, 2018
Thanks Katherine. And I’m not sure if you remember or not, but twenty-five years ago, you were my professor at Virginia Tech! Shortly before you retired I ran into you and we chatted for a bit. Either way, thanks for the nice comment. My best, Scott
steve rosse says:
Jul 17, 2018
“A beautiful and heartbreaking image.” Thanks for breaking that down for us, Scott. Glad you were around to tell us how to feel.
Donna Brooks says:
Jul 19, 2018
Exquisite scenery and sensation executed in such little space. Well done.
Trevy Thomas says:
Sep 2, 2018
Your story is beautiful and heartbreakingly familiar. I enjoyed it immensely.
Brian Schunk says:
Sep 17, 2018
Excellent use of dialogue and word choice to characterize the Bee-Man. I liked the effect the visit had on the hiker, both physical and mental. I also appreciated the distinction between loneliness and solitude. A thoughtful and joyful piece.
Isaac Yelder says:
Sep 18, 2018
This piece captured me by the use of imagery, I could feel my thighs aching from the bike ride as I looked upon this old farm-house in Appalachia. I wouldn’t say I felt like I knew this man perfectly but I would definitely like to get to know him. If I ever see old age, I’d like to live my life with quiet dignity and an admiration for life, just like the Bee Man. Beautiful story.
Iken Limjoco says:
Sep 18, 2018
Great use of detail in describing the scene, allowing the readers to really bring the authors words to life. The essay does a great job of depicting loneliness from another perspective. “Absolute solitude…and yet, companionship.”is my favorite line of the essay as it accumulates what the whole story is about, being lonely but not alone.
Isaac Yelder says:
Sep 18, 2018
I was first captured by the imagery, I could feel my thighs aching as I looked upon this Appalachia farm-house. But what sticks with me is the Bee Man’s beautiful outlook on life, finding joy in all things. If I ever see old age I’d like to live with quiet dignity and an admiration for the world the way he does. Beautiful story.
Christopher Sung says:
Sep 18, 2018
I love how the ending ties the entire story together with a takeaway; that solitude is different from loneliness. When I choose to go out by myself sometimes, it doesn’t mean I’m lonely. It is actually more peaceful and fulfilling sometimes when you are on your own. I too would like to experience something similar to, “fuzzy insect legs tickling my skin; little “tongues” lapping nectar from my arm hairs; “purty little eyes” paying me no mind.” The dialogue was a great way for me to get a good picture of this random, yet beautiful interaction.
Olivia DeGraca says:
Sep 18, 2018
From the opening words of this piece I somehow knew I would relate to it as a whole. I lived in Amsterdam for a period of time so naturally, the idea of a strenuous bike ride is a fond, relatable memory for me. However, this story unraveled to be so much more relatable than I could have assumed. Your take on loneliness versus solidarity is breathtaking. I had never thought of it in this way. Human beings always view being alone as loneliness and as someone who enjoys spending a lot of time along I thoroughly appreciate this analysis. Your take offers me a piece of mind.
Michael Winnett says:
Sep 19, 2018
The use of vivd imagery in this piece allowed me to feel as if I’ve been to southwest Virginia. The distinction between loneliness and solitude was eye opening for me as I’ve always wondered how people can live in rural areas and remain sane. The effect that the Bee-Man’s words had on the narrator really hit home for me. Great work.
Lacey Yahnke says:
Sep 20, 2018
I loved this piece! I think that the concept of absolute solitude versus loneliness is very important because it allows the complete vulnerability and uncomfortable feelings to arise in one’s head when they are alone, yet attempt to remain calm and care-free. I love how the Bee Man is an illustration of how comforting one’s individual thoughts, everyday experiences, and routines can truly be. I also really enjoyed the description of the scenery in this piece.
Jana Wiersema says:
Sep 21, 2018
Did you ever see the Bee Man again?
Scott Loring Sanders says:
Oct 12, 2018
To answer your question, no. I never saw him again. In fact, I originally had that as the last line of the piece but decided to cut it.
And thanks to all of the above for their kind comments and observations. I haven’t been on here in a while, but the appreciation for my work, well, it’s much appreciated.
Jane Walker says:
Nov 1, 2018
At a time like this your true story reminds us that there are still good people in the world. We just have to slow our pace and look for them.
As an aside, we are friends of uour aunt Donna and Bob.