Back when our oldest son was a girl, we called him the Chicken Whisperer. He had this gift of stepping up to unruly roosters—the ones that chased his brother to the carpool in the morning, zeroing in like cruise missiles, the ones that made our grown house-sitters sob and sniff—and scooping them up like babies. Cannonball, Chewbacca, Lucifer, Herman Melville: He’d flip them around in his arms, talons-up, tucking the head back against his budding chest, the red wattles disappearing into their folded necks. The birds would grow calm, thoughtful. They’d study our amazed expressions with a placid chicken eye as if to say ‘what, wouldn’t you want to be here if you could?’
We did. We were all in the wild then, living in lost mountains that looked out over the ocean: fog crept out through the trees in the mornings, then back in as the sun went down smelling of salt and fish, long days spent at sea. S, too, would go out into the world unprotected: slogging from the car into the little Santa Cruz school behind the marijuana dispensary, his shoulders hunched, dyed-hair in deep bangs, glasses and shiny braces. We imagined him in the back of the classroom, dodging eye contact, eating hunkered like a bird over his plastic-wrapped feed, sharp and quick and prickly
Only in the evenings did we
have any hint of what he’d become. We’d watch, secretly, from the high window
in the upstairs bedroom. He’d drop the weighty backpack in the driveway and
stretch, one limb at a time. Then he’d sprint for the fence. He’d crack the
gate and step through: shoulders now high, hair thrown back, arms outstretched
like wings, and we’d watch as all the hens would bow down before him.
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Doug Lawson’s writing has appeared in a number of literary publications, including Glimmer Train Stories, repeatedly in the Mississippi Review, and has been short-listed for Best American Short Stories. His most recent book is Bigfoots in Paradise, from Red Hen Press. His blog’s online at HouseOnBearMountain.com.
8 comments
Mary Helen Stefaniak says:
Jan 29, 2020
This is GREAT. Like your son, the reader has to make the leap. Thank you!
Rochelle says:
Jan 30, 2020
Beautiful.
Eileen says:
Feb 9, 2020
This is gorgeous. I couldn’t imagine how the magic of that first sentence could be sustained, but then it was. Just…wow!
Joy says:
Feb 10, 2020
Thank you – love this! Wonderfully lyrical.
Ginnie says:
Feb 11, 2020
Absolutely beautiful!
Adrienne says:
Mar 3, 2020
Full of love and beautiful imagery.
Dahlian KIrby says:
Apr 5, 2020
loved it. Simple and full of love.
Royce says:
May 16, 2020
I absolutely love this piece as minor the gender issue, this boy is me 50 years ago. I still do the birds and felt jealous, angry, depressed? that those years have gone so fast, perhaps the loss of youth. It brought tears to my eyes the first time I read it several months ago, and it still brings them. I absolutely love this piece.