Six of us in a Cutlass in a Saint Paul suburb. That weekend visitors had come to town. Tom and Sharon, another married couple, had known my parents back in Milwaukee. Tom and Dad had written ad copy together. The visitors slept on the pullout couch that weekend in the TV room. We’d all crammed into the car at night, the four grown-ups, my brother and me, driving home from seeing some sleepy suburban sight my grown-up brain can’t recall. I was nine, my brother, four. Headlights reflected off patches of smooth ice.
Beside me in the front seat, Mom turned around to say something to her friends, but then stopped herself. Then she whispered, near my ear, “Aw.” Dad glanced in the rearview mirror. I’d never heard my mother use this word, so I twisted around, pulled up to my knees, and peered over the seat.
Tom slumbered, lips parted, his head against his wife’s shoulder.
Rugged, the world would call a man like Tom. A Newport cigarette ad—strong, tan, perfect teeth. A Sears underwear model in the Sunday paper who stands around with other men, all of them in their briefs, footballs tucked under their arms, chatting about—what? Fishing? The Vikings? What do you talk about to another dude in briefs?
“He looks like an angel,” Mom said. My little brother, pressed against the backseat door, gave a bored glance, looked away. I stared down at sleeping Tom; at his soft eyelashes, coupled with the strong, stubbled jaw, relaxed in sleep, and everything in me paused.
Through the windows, patches of streetlight slid across his face, and something moved through my chest. I want everyone to go away, I thought, so that I can look at him by myself. The rough shadow of his beard. How would it feel, I thought, to curl up against him?
The question tangled up with feelings: I wanted to be like him, to resemble him, to take Tom’s angelic face as my own, envied and admired. Later, in college, I’d read the myth of Cupid and Psyche. Her lantern’s light falling across his sleeping face. Her sudden and doomed devotion. I floundered in troubled waters, strange feelings like these, all caught up in my lungs.
The car turned a corner, and shadows slid back over Tom’s face. Even at nine I knew I couldn’t have the things I wanted from him, and that only sharpened my hunger until I had to look away. As I did, Sharon smiled up at me, and for a moment I hated her for owning him. Anxious that she’d read my thoughts, I turned back, settling against the seat, my shoulder pressed against my mother’s side.
Rays of streetlight moved over the hood of the car and up the windshield. The week before, I’d stayed up too late watching Donald Sutherland on TV running from aliens—pod people bent on taking over the planet. They looked like everyone else but felt nothing, and as we made our way home, I pictured the streetlights as alien sentinels, scanning passing cars for panic or fear.
If they sensed the things I wanted from Tom, they’d snatch me up and carry me off to their oozing nests, and lay a quivering pod beside me, an alien boy inside, his skin running like hot wax till his face matched mine.
Mom looked out at the neighbors’ houses. Dad held his hands at two and ten o’clock on the steering wheel, and his eyes kept returning to the rearview mirror. A hunger rolled off his skin. I could feel its heat. I feel it now. I’m close to fifty and it smolders.
I was a nine-year-old kid who knew nothing. Too young to grasp hunger, but still it shamed me—the naked need pulsing in my father beside me in the front seat of a Cutlass in 1980. Dad was a plainspoken cipher. An awkward man from another planet. He was all I had.
In another year he’d leave our mother for a life spent in the company of other men. I was a chip off that defective block, and he was already teaching me what not to do.
Hide your hunger. Dig a hole in the floor of your brain and throw it inside. Cover it with grave dust.
A man slept behind me. He’ll still be there when I’m fifty, softly snoring in the back seat, the thing I can’t have.
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Michael McAllister lives in western Massachusetts and has work published or soon appearing in The Normal School, Michigan Quarterly Review, and The New York Times’ Modern Love column. He has an MFA from Columbia University where he was nonfiction editor of Columbia Journal, and is working on a book-length memoir. For nearly two decades he’s blogged at dogpoet.com.
18 comments
Jan Priddy says:
Jan 18, 2021
Ownership.
Will says:
Jan 18, 2021
DAMN, bud!!!! You can write!!!! I can so relate! I’ve often wanted to hug you, but now more than ever! The story is touching, but the emotions stirred are palpable.
Jerry says:
Jan 18, 2021
Amazing, Michael. I so admire your writing.
Judy says:
Jan 18, 2021
Michael McAllister is a gifted writer whose ability to evoke deep emotion through seemingly simple prose never fails to affect me. Thank you, Brevity, for giving his work the space to breathe. And thank you, Michael, for continuing to practice your craft, your art.
Patrick Simard says:
Jan 18, 2021
This is a beautiful writing filled with details, sentiments … I could see myself sitting in that back car witnessing and melting for Tom! It brings back my personal relation I had with my friend’s dad when I was also around 9 or 10.
Hopefully we can read more about this story.
Yilmar Henry says:
Jan 18, 2021
I would like more of these stories. Good reading.
Paul says:
Jan 19, 2021
Your writing is always a truth told in a way in which it can be understood. There is a wonderful awareness to it. This piece has your trademark strength, humour, openness and vulnerability. You have that gift that some writers and story tellers have to transport me to an experience that feels like it’s mine.
Candice says:
Jan 26, 2021
This is wonderfully written. Thank you for the vividness of your storytelling.
Michael McAllister says:
Jan 27, 2021
I’m grateful to everyone for taking the time to leave your insights and feedback. It’s so much appreciated.
Brad Witherspoon says:
Jan 28, 2021
Wow Mike! What a beautifully written coming of age story. It totally encapsulates the confusing time in a young gay person’s life when they are becoming aware of their sexuality, while at the same time realizing what they desire is not considered the norm. The part about your father is particularly poignant. I hope he found the happiness he sought in his new life. Thanks for sharing this wonderful story.
Len Warner says:
Mar 17, 2021
Strange, beautiful, and sad.
Ric d. Stark says:
Mar 24, 2021
Michael, Is it universal– that we all cling to, replay, crave, dream again, again, again and again that youthful fantasy– the one that pierced deepest– the one we companion our whole lives– knowing we never can nor could nor would have as our own– that it forever belongs to an other? Or is it something that only we gay men thirst to savor? Or even perhaps only we gay men, who were taught by a father, who perfected it before us and then passed it forward, father to son, gay to gay? Oh, just once– to touch that knee, to nestle against that beard– but not, only in memory forever re-lived.
Mark C says:
Mar 26, 2021
Beautifully written, so vivid and so relatable. Thank you for this
Larry says:
May 21, 2021
I really enjoyed this. Thank you for sharing it.
Gordon DeLand says:
May 31, 2021
Thank you again Mike. Excellent writing, shifting between people and place, between shadows, thoughts, and feelings. I recognize those feelings, and the hiding in my own life. I’m happy for you, that you feel free enough to unearth them, share them in a way that honors them and you.
Blessings.
Joel Kennedy says:
Jul 9, 2021
Love this!!!!!
Kali says:
Oct 13, 2021
I love your writing and feel honored to take a ride through your memories. It feels really honest and raw and vulnerable. Thank you
J.D. says:
Nov 3, 2021
Beautiful.