“Before you know kindness as the deepest thing inside,
you must know sorrow as the other deepest thing.” ~ Naomi Shihab Nye
When my husband was freshly dead, I felt as if I had been cut open for surgery and my veins and arteries cauterized so that I wouldn’t bleed all over the pavement leading from my car to the store or on the carpet at the bank or on the trail through the park. Like a gaping wound in my solar plexus lay hidden beneath my clothes.
Walking down the street, I’d think, Nobody knows. Nobody knows that my husband just died. I look like any other ordinary person going about business. They can’t see the hole. And I’d wonder how many others I would pass or stand next to that carried their own hole? I moved in a hyper-conscious awareness, as though I were a spirit who had crossed over myself, one who had the ability to see auras around bodies, feel pain and suffering between the veiled cloth of dimensions. I felt a softness, ripe and bruised as a purple plum. Yet, others couldn’t see the rawness of my insides.
Some would say stupid, hurtful things.
“You’ll marry again.”
“He’s in a better place.”
“It’s okay; you’ll get over it soon.”
The opposite of kindness.
Later, when the hole had begun to grow a layer of scarring over itself, delicate as the lattice webbing of membranes that make up a dragonfly’s wing, I pushed my cart up to the checkout stand at Trader Joe’s. The checker, a thin young man with short black hair, about twenty-one years old, asked me how I was doing. It’s the kind of small talk one makes to the endless stream of people passing through a checkout line.
“All right,” I said, a bit curt, without a smile.
“Just all right?” he said.
“Yes, just all right.”
“Not good? Not great?” he pushed.
The place in my body that housed the hole tensed. I said, “Okay, because you’re pushing me for an answer, I’m going to tell you what I wouldn’t normally. My husband died last year and it is almost the anniversary. So, no, I’m not good or great. I’m all right.”
I expected him to react the way most people do when confronted by the awkwardness of grief. I expected him to say something basic like “I’m sorry for your loss” and turn his body away, avoiding eye contact.
Instead, he stopped what he was doing and looked directly into my eyes and said, “That must be very hard for you.”
The hustle and bustle of the store fell away. There was a low hum in my ear. My vision narrowed as if looking through a swirling kaleidoscope to the center at the end of the tube. I focused on his dark eyes. Watery pools of compassion, empathy. The tightness around my hole relaxed.
“What was his name?” he asked.
“Steve,” I said.
“What day is the anniversary?”
Slow. He moved slow with his words. Careful.
“April 5th,” I said.
He nodded solemnly and asked, “What is your name?” When I told him, he reached out and tenderly took my hand. He said, “I’m so sorry for your loss, Laurie.” He did not turn away. His gaze penetrated mine, and I felt bathed in deep, abiding kindness.
And I wondered at the ability of this young man to do what so many in my life could not. Did he have his own hole? Had he witnessed the gaping wound and recovery of someone else’s?
The older man who had begun bagging my groceries but disappeared during this exchange, returned carrying a bouquet of flowers. He handed me the bouquet. “Can I help you to your car?” he asked.
I never accept these offers. I am too proud, too independent. I glanced at his nametag. It read: “Steve.”
This time, I said, “Yes.”
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Laurie Easter’s essay collection All the Leavings debuts October 15 from Oregon State University Press. Her essays have appeared in The Rumpus, Pithead Chapel, and Under the Gum Tree, among others, and anthologized in The Shell Game: Writers Play with Borrowed Forms and A Harp in the Stars: An Anthology of Lyric Essays. To learn more, visit laurieeaster.com
22 comments
Suzanne Farrell Smith says:
Sep 15, 2021
Oh my. “And I’d wonder how many others I would pass or stand next to that carried their own hole?” I’m undone.
Ruth Hoffman says:
Sep 15, 2021
What a gentle reminder to not turn away from grief. Thank you.
Margie Bailey says:
Sep 15, 2021
Comfort comes in the most surprising places. God bless that young man. Love how the older man offered you flowers and his name was Steve. An employee at Trader Joe’s walked up to Christy and offered her a bouquet of flowers. Love to you Laurie.
Candace Cahill says:
Sep 16, 2021
So intimately lovely. Thank you.
Cheryl says:
Sep 16, 2021
Oh, Laurie, tears are flowing. This is so beautiful.
Phyllis says:
Sep 16, 2021
Like Candace, this is so very lovely. Not what I expected and I was happy for the turn.
Reese says:
Sep 17, 2021
I’m sharing this with my students right now. A great piece.
Beth says:
Sep 17, 2021
Thank you, thank you thank you.
Annie Penfield says:
Sep 18, 2021
So much sadness. And hopeful. A reminder to stand still and look each other in the eye. Beautifully done.
Royce says:
Sep 24, 2021
Thank you for reminding us that as difficult as it is to share at times because we think no one will understand, now and then good things may happen when we do.
Suzanne Roberts says:
Sep 25, 2021
This is such a beautiful essay. It made me cry.
Summer says:
Sep 28, 2021
Oh my gosh, Laurie, you have captured how I am feeling, exactly. My husband died in June, 2021. An untimely death from cancer. It’s still so hard to believe that he is gone. I have been showing up, engaging with others, talking and smiling, while at the same time, underneath it all, I wonder if anyone sees through my disguise. I am going through the motions, on auto-pilot. You are blessed to have had that encounter with the kind Trader Joe’s young man. Blessings are often around the corner and unexpected. Thank you for this piece.
Laurie Easter says:
Sep 30, 2021
Oh, Summer, I am so deeply sorry for the loss of your husband. Mine, too, was an untimely death from cancer. He was diagnosed with stage IV and died weeks later. Your loss is so fresh. I really feel for you and the place you are in right now. I hope you have people in your life you can be real with about your experience and that you are getting support. It’s okay to not smile, not laugh, to not put on a disguise. Please be gentle with your tender heart. One step at a time. So much love to you.
Heidi Naylor says:
Oct 6, 2021
What a very lovely essay. I’m tempted to believe you had an angel that day at Trader Joe’s (it is something I sometimes think). But in reality you had two very fine humans who saw you in gentleness and community. Thank you for sharing this.
Sarah Cedeño says:
Oct 28, 2021
Such a gorgeous, heartbreaking piece. I’m so sorry for your loss. What beauty you’ve made from it.
abigail Thomas says:
Nov 6, 2021
well, you made me cry again, Laurie. But I needed to. Thank you for this.
Rebecca Denison says:
Nov 24, 2021
I’m so sorry for your loss. This essay is so beautiful, it made me weepy, perhaps all the more because I once had a similar experience with a cashier. Thank you for the reminder that no matter our lot in life, opportunities are always there to let a fellow human being feel seen, heard, and comforted.
Tess Kelly says:
Dec 22, 2021
I really love the humanity in this essay, Laurie. It brought tears to my eyes. Thank you for your words.
Kaitlin Johns says:
Jan 9, 2022
I really enjoyed reading this essay, thank you for this. This is a beautiful piece that everyone should read to really understand loss and kindness.
Martha says:
Feb 28, 2023
What I find so fascinating and clever about this essay is that it begins so brutally, which allows it to end in a touching way that does not strike the reader as overly sentimental.
Bailey Tenney says:
Mar 28, 2023
This is a beautiful piece. So sentimental and strong
mark kinn says:
Feb 15, 2024
This is a beautiful essay. I welled up by the end. Her description of the pain following her husband’s death is remarkable, (I’m a physician), especially how she may bleed everywhere she goes. “Membranes that make up a dragonfly’s wing” So poetic. And, of course, the moving ending.
I will read more of her work.