It’s all empty beer cans and skinny dipping. (Bud Light and chlorine.) A guitar player with a beard who won’t let go as hard as you do. It’s teasing the strings of your orange bikini while he tosses his trunks onto the stone. It’s the ease of your body through dark water. The day he taped a letter to your door, when he played that same chord, asking you not to leave, to live inside yourself for a while. It’s this night, when he strums the water and says, “I guess there’s a little Jill Talbot in all of us.” And you worry where that leaves you.
It’s distracting, watching out a kitchen window while the clock hands on the wall stretch into an L. Sheets taut as a boxing canvas. Now it’s twenty after. And the gravel in the drive is still, unscattered. It’s a woman in a purple coat bobbing through the back gate to peer through the dusty window of your garage. And you weaving behind the curtain. It’s an empty back bedroom, where the phone throws its high-pitched rings like punches.
It’s all apologies. Or the ones you should offer but never do.
It’s running red lights after midnight. Drinking hours before the party and tripping over a rock in the living room (this one a Ph.D. student in Geology). It’s stumbling from the back steps to find him surveying her neck with his tongue. You get to your Jeep, corrade empty streets, do that screaming crying thing you do and strike the dash with the flat of your hand. Every red light a dare.
It’s all underlining words in used novels.
It’s crossing borders. A two-buck boat ride across the Rio Grande and a dusty truck, a street with a corner canteen with bars on the windows (but no doors). It’s straddling a swayback horse out to the edge of town to talk with a woman who left Texas when her husband died. It’s sharing an ashtray and stubbing out the afternoon. One sad story at a time. It’s standing on a rock overlooking the river and seeing your life from a different country while the sun drops its orange curtain. A desert inside you.
It’s all thunderstorms in the distance.
Blinking lights on the answering machine.
A pay phone on the corner.
It’s running away from yourself knowing it’s something you can never really do.
82 west out of Lubbock.
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Jill Talbot is the author of Loaded: Women and Addiction, co-editor of The Art of Friction: Where (Non)Fictions Come Together, and the editor of Metawritings: Toward a Theory of Nonfiction. Her essays have appeared in or are forthcoming from DIAGRAM, Ecotone, The Normal School, Passages North, The Paris Review Daily, The Pinch, Seneca Review, Zone 3, and more.
11 comments
Tim Hillegonds says:
Sep 19, 2014
“Sheets taut as boxing canvas.” Forever going to be wishing I wrote that line. Fantastic essay.
It’s Never Just Me: Jill Talbot on “All or Nothing, Self-Portrait at Twenty-Seven” | BREVITY's Nonfiction Blog says:
Oct 2, 2014
[…] “All or Nothing, Self-Portrait at Twenty-Seven” began with Hemingway. I was flipping through The Garden of Eden and came across one of my underlines: “When you start to live outside yourself, it’s all dangerous.” And I thought, yes, it is, so I decided to try to write an essay about how I was doing that back then. I included the Hemingway line as an epigraph and started the essay: “Because you’re Jill Talbot, it’s all empty beer cans and skinny dipping.” […]
Vita Lusty says:
Oct 7, 2014
Living behind the orange curtain. Thank you!
Sandra Lambert says:
Oct 2, 2014
I’m printing out this essay and the accompanying blog post. I need to do my own underlining.
Monica Guzman says:
Nov 16, 2014
“It’s running red lights after midnight…” That paragraph held so much. Each sentence a new layer. Then back to the lights and their dare. Loved the lexicon of geology there.
Spencer Osberg says:
Nov 28, 2014
This was like a montage of images projected onto the screen in front of my skull, sensations lined up like shooters at the bar. I’ve finished my second read and my mind feels like my stomach does after a warm bowl of mom’s chicken soup.
Almond Jess says:
Nov 30, 2014
The tone in this essay rings true even in the age of all cellphones and less payphones, I love this piece, great work.
Cary Tennis says:
Dec 10, 2014
Love this.
Jessica says:
Dec 18, 2014
Truly excellent! Adore it.
Angela Burton says:
Dec 21, 2014
I love everything about this piece. I think the end is the next to last line though…there’s the final punch.
Only So Much Air: A Flash Metaphor | BREVITY's Nonfiction Blog says:
Jan 16, 2015
[…] upcoming January 2015 issue, here’s a brilliant new metaphor for flash prose from Brevity contributor Jill […]