Years ago, Dad, you asked me at midnight to come outside. I followed you—of course I did—out of our house, into the humid dark. My feet brushed against the cool lick of grass, my hair lay still against my face in the unmoving night.
Crickets whispered. A car on 55th Street hummed as you handed me a flashlight, asked me to hold it above as you bent to earth, began to plant flowers in holes made with your hands. And I felt—with the flashlight, the digging, the hush—like we were explorers stealing treasure underground, or better yet, discovering new worlds.
“Why now?” I asked, twenty but feeling like a child.
“I told your mom I’d plant these today. Forgot until now.”
You handed me a broken flower you couldn’t plant, told me to put it in my room. I asked what kind it was.
“Blue,” you said and smiled at yourself.
“So you have no idea?”
“Nope. Your mom’s the chooser. I’m just the planter.”
I looked to Mom’s window then, her bedroom light aglow above us, imagined her pajamaed body, imagined the quick dose of morphine you’d give her, one day too soon, once you finished tending earth and were on to tending her, her insides cancer-speckled like the marks of black on your soiled hands.
I held the flashlight steady as we shifted right to untouched ground. You dripped sweat into a new hole, buried it with the flower’s roots. The next-door neighbors’ garage door shut softly.
“Goodnight, Cathy. Goodnight, Chris,” you said so only I could hear.
“Goodnight, Moon,” I added, face to sky, face-to-face with that moon, and you laughed and I loved that, your laugh for me in the black-night safety, a laugh I’ll miss when Mom goes, and there are no more too-late flowers, and your lightness gets buried with her.
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Maggie Pahos is a writer living in New Orleans. She holds an MFA from Chatham University and her work has appeared in the Pittsburgh Post-Gazette, Flyway: Journal of Writing and Environment, Atticus Review, and Hippocampus Magazine. She is currently working on a memoir about the year she spent traveling through thirteen countries following her mother’s death.
Photo by Marcia Krause Bilyk
10 comments
Priscilla says:
Jan 19, 2016
Lovely. Breath-taking final thought.
Phyllis says:
Jan 19, 2016
Beautiful.
Hayley LeMay says:
Jan 20, 2016
I love this essay. What a wonderful tribute to your parents.
Randy Bates says:
Jan 26, 2016
I love it too. Goodnight, Moon–unforgettable.
Michelle says:
Feb 2, 2016
So beautiful. Thank you for sharing such a tender memory and making it sing.
Cherye says:
Feb 8, 2016
I had to take several deep breaths of gratitude for your ability to feel the emotion of this night. Thank you
Sue Granzella says:
Feb 18, 2016
This is a GORGEOUS piece. A beautiful ache…. just so very lovely. Thank you.
Cora Schenberg says:
Feb 22, 2016
I often read Brevity over lunch. Today, I clicked on this essay. I loved the one-word title–I love blue, and challenged myself to think how the title would come to make sense, after I’d read the essay. Reading, I savored the details, like the way the summer grass feels under your feet. I loved Dad’s answer to the question what kind of flowers these were. Before I got to the cancer part, I already felt tenderly about this family. I shattered when I read what was happening to Mom. This was so concise, simple, and poignant. I feel sad, yet grateful–thank you for this amazing story.
Nyoka says:
Jan 30, 2017
Wow. Thank you.
Sally Bury says:
May 17, 2019
So skillfully written. It made me teary eyed. I shared it with my husband who had made a similar decision regarding his mother about 5 years ago. Maggie Pahos exposed her affection for the way her dad loved her mother plus why she loved him.