Across from the mountains, across from the fishing boat paused in the waves, waves like aluminum foil, across from the snowcaps too high to melt, and across from the peaks singing Climb us, climb us! Grab a grappling hook, across from the boat and the sushi it harvests: salmon rolls and dynamite rolls and dragons, across from the sun (the only person who can be in one place and everywhere simultaneously), across from the nearby crags, and across from the ocean, and across from China, and across from Russia, and atop these vertical rocks on Canada’s west coast, on this beach that has no sand—pops a purple crocus, alone, stretching from hard stone, and you know what crocuses celebrate, and could this be that moment? and, yes, the world has refreshed again, and it is the seasonal new year, and it was just the lunar new year, and before that the solar, and before that the liturgical, and before that the Jewish, and the Islamic, and the Theravada Buddhist, and look at us, we keep getting to start over, getting new weather and new stringed instruments and hearing, yes, we admit, new batches of crows, whom we should forgive for being symbolically ominous, which was our fault anyway, but also new seagulls who remind us we are on the beach, on the edge of the unknown, and in the grass behind me naps a bearded young man in brown and tan blankets like he wants to be mistaken for a Jedi or Jesus, which is why I followed him here like a sign, though I wanted sugar from a café, want fish and chips from the pier, want to give up pescetarianism and taste beef jerky the first time in years, and I like my phone because I am flirting with someone witty and new, miles down the coast, and I want to board a steamship to them and say Take me to the art museum with the meditation tours and the Korean calligraphy, and I haven’t even mentioned bread yet, or hummus, or the endorphins jogging brings, or the way strangers tell you shortcuts if you ask, even if you mispronounce a building, and I want to go to that village near the forest, want to stay here and swim even if the water would freeze my blood, want wake the sleeping Jesus, want to ask him big questions and offer him a hardboiled egg from my satchel, want to find the peacocks in that park, to both wear my golden sweater and shed it, and I want to stop saying Wanting too many things at once is a good problem to have, because it is not a problem, it’s just having eyes, and it’s not my fault: I didn’t make the world as wonderful as it, sometimes, appears, and I don’t want to think about later, but instead stay on this vertical rock all afternoon, all week, sketching with this pen a stranger lent then gave me, beside this crow playing his feathered game of grabbing a nut, flying it straight up then dropping it, retrieving it, dropping it, again and again until it cracks open and feeds him.
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Brad Aaron Modlin wrote Everyone at This Party Has Two Names and Surviving in Drought. His essays and poems have appeared in Fourth Genre, River Teeth, DIAGRAM, Beloit Poetry Journal, The Slowdown, and Poetry Unbound. The Reynolds Endowed Chair of Creative Writing at University of Nebraska, Kearney, he teaches (under)grads.
Photo by Dinty W. Moore
8 comments
Lacey says:
May 8, 2023
I love this. The energy!
Hannah says:
May 8, 2023
Ecstatic joy. Love this piece
Lukas says:
Jul 14, 2023
Makes me happy to be alive!
KazeBatch says:
Aug 12, 2023
I love this. The energy!
H says:
Aug 23, 2023
So many times, it is the small things overlooked. That one detail puts it all back into perspective. We ALL need to take a moment to smell the flowers. Get back to the singularity of stillness. Be that cool breeze on a hot day, never knowing who you may affect. The unselfish act of true giving just because that is where it is at. Thanks for sharing, it is a wonderful moment of stillness you provided
Bob says:
Sep 4, 2023
Paragraphs are not the enemy, Brad
Novels Tamil says:
Sep 11, 2023
Your title alone is thought-provoking, and it drew me in instantly.
This piece appears to be a deep exploration of the complex human experience, where the hunger for more, whether it’s knowledge, love, or fulfillment, is a universal theme.
It’s a reminder that our insatiable appetites are what drive us to grow, learn, and seek meaning in this vast and abundant world.
I’m eager to read your insights and reflections on this intriguing topic. Thank you for sharing your thoughts and perspective with us. ????
Polly Hansen says:
May 10, 2024
I love the breathless stream of consciousness here. It’s how I feel sometimes when I walk the hills in my neighborhood and see distance mountains loving every inch of them. Thanks for noparagraphs.