The tiny Montana town I grew up in had one main intersection where two highways came together at a T-shaped junction. One stop sign told vehicles traveling east to give way to the north and south traffic passing straight through town. On the corner stood Dad’s pharmacy: a two-story, baby blue, eyesore of a building. Dad chose to paint it blue when he got a great deal on paint: price always trumped appearance in Dad’s world.
After Dad’s stroke, the bank threatened to foreclose unless I moved back to help him get things back on track. My first priority was painting the store. As I painted at the top of a thirty-five-foot ladder, I saw Louie, a local teenager, driving by in his late model Mazda pick-up, shirtless after a hard day of swinging a hammer.
At the intersection, a van from a university out east pulled in front of him. Louie, no time to react, center punched his truck into the much larger vehicle.
I scurried down the ladder and ran over to the wreck. Louie was huffing away and grimacing in pain from taking the steering wheel to the chest. The mostly young female passengers in the van had exited, seemed unhurt, and I’ll admit I got a little excited because a vanload of young women about my age had just showed up, and I could speak college.
“Is everybody all right?” I said in an official tone.
Nobody answered.
Then a mumbling snippet of a statement floated in the air: “…what a shitty truck.”
Louie huffed a little bit, and I told him to ignore the comment. He rubbed his bare chest while the rest of us waited for the police and fire department to show. Nobody asked if Louie was okay.
The van driver, a college kid with Carhartt shorts and a pompadour haircut, stood, arms crossed, scowling at Louie and me while the others gave us occasional glances. Someone muttered a statement that ended with “…trailer park.”
Louie grumbled and I told him to toughen up.
When the police arrived, the driver finally opened his mouth. Every word he spoke was like a dead pine tree above an uphill fire. “It’s not my fault,” he kept repeating. “He should have stopped when he saw me.”
The officer, writing in his notebook, answered, “You had the stop sign and he didn’t.”
Someone in the college kid huddle said, “…his paint-covered jeans are filthy.”
I turned to calm Louie, then realized they were talking about me.
Louie smiled. It was his turn to tell me to ignore the comments.
I was confused. I wanted to tell them all that I had a college degree, that I worked in hospitals, that Dad was sick and his pharmacy was failing, that I was a good person, a smart person. But I said nothing.
The driver shot a look at Louie and argued to the officer, “He didn’t swerve to miss me because he wanted me to buy him a new truck.”
As if you’re so rich and Louie’s so poor, I thought.
What I wanted to say was that Louie would never trick someone into buying him a new truck. I wanted to say that Louie was a good kid, that nothing came easy for him in his life, that he earned everything he had, that he too was going off to college.
But I didn’t say a thing.
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Emry McAlear grew up in Montana and now lives with his family in Sussex, England, where he makes the locals uncomfortable because he smiles too often and talks too much to strangers. He won the Montana Prize for Nonfiction in 2015 and has been a finalist for the New Letters prize in Nonfiction, the Lamar York Prize, and the Thomas A. Wilhelmus Nonfiction Award.
Photo by Dinty W. Moore
26 comments
Karen Willett says:
Sep 19, 2017
Can’t wait to read more. Small town living sure can create some great stories.
Emry McAlear says:
Sep 20, 2017
Thank you so much for the post, Karen. I wrote this essay after the presidential election. I asked myself why America is so divided: rich/poor, minority/majority, urban/rural. This is just one of the virtually infinite numbers of examples. Oh, if we could simply respect the other side we would understand so much more.
Emry McAlear says:
Sep 21, 2017
Thank you so much, Karen. I’m glad you enjoyed it.
Brigitte says:
Sep 20, 2017
Thought provoking: you could imagine yourself gigllling a bit at the sight of shirtless Louie and gutted at the prejudice.
Emry McAlear says:
Sep 26, 2017
Thanks you for your post, Brigitte. I appreciate your insight.
Hayley says:
Sep 24, 2017
Well written, sweet, and thoughtful essay. I love it!
Emry McAlear says:
Sep 26, 2017
Thank you sharing your thoughts, Hayley. I truly appreciate you taking the time to comment and I’m glad you enjoyed my essay.
Jll says:
Sep 26, 2017
So true and so annoyingly accurate.
I want to read the perfect parallel universe one 😉 unfortunately we don’t live in that world.
Emry McAlear says:
Sep 27, 2017
Thank you so much for the post… “the perfect parallel universe” … that really makes me smile.
Dalton says:
Oct 26, 2017
Great representation of honesty within a tough moment. I really enjoyed this. I look forward to reading more by Emry.
Emry McAlear says:
Nov 7, 2017
Thank you so much, Dalton. I really appreciate the comment.
Susan says:
Nov 13, 2017
Hey Emry,
Good to read your work. Forge ahead! Louie and you are quite the characters. More!
Emry McAlear says:
Dec 16, 2017
Thank you for the post, Susan. I appreciate the comments.
Nancy says:
Dec 9, 2017
Very clever the way the protagonist changes sides (is forced to change sides), the way he is forced to examine the groups he belongs to.
Emry McAlear says:
Dec 16, 2017
Interesting. I never thought about it like that. Thanks a lot for the comment!!
Mary Ellen says:
Apr 7, 2018
This story so concisely tells a great deal about the ugliness of someone in the wrong trying to exonerate himself by a posed superiority. I am impressed by the economy of the language in conveying so much in so few words. And what does Louie think of it?
Emry McAlear says:
Apr 13, 2018
Thank you for your comments, Mary Ellen. I appreciate your insight. I’ll have to ask Louie what he thinks of the essay the next time I’m back home.
John says:
Apr 7, 2018
I can picture the scene, and it feels like I was there. How long will it stay in memory? Could be some time. Good writing.
Emry McAlear says:
Apr 13, 2018
Thank you for your comment, John. It’s always a thrill for me to get another person’s perspective on my work. All the best!!
Susie McNeely says:
Apr 8, 2018
Your essay was chocked full of entertainment. On reflection, I am more appreciative of living in a Louie-like community.
Susie
Emry McAlear says:
Apr 13, 2018
Thank you for taking the time to comment, Susie. I’m glad you enjoyed the essay. There sure are a lot of us small town kids running around aren’t there. Best wishes, Susie!!
Mel says:
Apr 8, 2018
I can speak English and Spanish and can murder French and German but not sure I can speak college.. Very enjoyable brevity with much to say between the few lines that expand to many more thoughts about perceptions and biases!!
Emry McAlear says:
Apr 13, 2018
Thanks for commenting, Mel. I’m not sure I can still speak college because I graduated more than a few years ago and if you don’t use it, you lose it. Thanks again, Mel. I’m glad you enjoyed the essay.
H. M. Bowker says:
Nov 19, 2019
The narrative is excellent. I can see Twin Bridges’ intersection/characters are down-to-earth. I am blown away by the moral dilemma. How many of us know we should do something/say something/support something–yet we stand by silently, letting life unfold without our stepping in/standing up/taking the risk of offending or being looked down on by others. This is powerful writing, Emry. It carries the “Why didn’t I say something?” beyond the end of the story.
H. M. Bowker
Emry McAlear says:
Jan 28, 2020
Thank you very much for your comments. I’m certainly flattered by your insight especially since I have your book on my bed stand as I type this.
Thanks again!! Emry.
Vincent says:
Sep 26, 2023
It’s a reminder of how people often make assumptions about others based on appearances and backgrounds without truly knowing their stories.