That’s what the teachers called them when they arrived at school every year in early October. Even though they looked worn-out in their faded, frayed clothes, I imagined their lives as worldly, exotic, roving from place to place, delivering three days of carnival razzle-dazzle to small towns like mine.
I envied them because they never stayed at school long enough to take a spelling test, to hand in math homework, to get grades on anything. Envied them because I figured they got gobs of fair stuff for free: sideshow tickets, plush teddy bear prizes, corn dogs, cotton candy, all the fried funnel cakes they could eat.
When they showed up in sixth grade, I asked the girl in my homeroom where she was from, and she said “Matt Armstrong Shows.” I wondered, how could someone be from the fair? Didn’t she have a home somewhere? I wanted to know, but I didn’t ask because I didn’t want to embarrass her. I also wanted to hear about their adventures on the road, to compare their experiences to my family’s cross-country vacations. Had they seen the Grand Canyon? Did they stop at Stuckey’s for salt-water taffy? Did their dads belt out cowboy songs while driving down the highway?
Most of all, I longed for tips on how to score better-than-basic prizes when I played the games of chance. How should I pitch the ping-pong ball to make it plop into the goldfish bowl? How come the darts I threw bounced off the balloons? Perhaps the girls from the fair would share the secrets to winning with me. But when I approached them on the playground at recess, they bunched into a nest under an oak tree, so I left them alone.
Later, at the fair with my sister Ann, I saw a girl from my math class working at the goldfish booth game. A canvas apron bulging with ping-pong balls dangled from her waist as she crouched to retrieve more balls from the mud-mashed grass. Saw another girl from school with a too-tight ponytail handing fistfuls of darts to a knot of teenage boys. She stepped aside right before the boys pop, pop, popped row after row of balloons, then swaggered off with stuffed teddy bears wedged under their armpits, leaving her to yank darts and deflated balloons from the pocked plywood. In that moment, she looked old in more of a tired than grown-up way, and suddenly playing booth games didn’t feel fun anymore with those girls stooping to collect my spent chances.
Ann and I headed down the midway toward the Tilt-a-Whirl. While waiting in line, I noticed, beyond the rainbow-spangled lights, a string of aluminum camper trailers parked at cockeyed angles, like a derailed train. That must be where they stay, I thought, remembering the girl who’d told me she was from Matt Armstrong Shows. It didn’t seem right that I got to live in a two-story brick house with four bedrooms, a fireplace, a front porch, a covered garage, and a two-acre yard with pecan, magnolia, and sweet gum trees.
Edging closer to the Tilt-a-Whirl, I stared at the dark, oily chain churning beneath its round red platform, at the grinding gears, raising and lowering and tilting and spinning the red-domed tip carts. A leathery-faced man with a cigarette clamped at the corner of his mouth tore my pink paper ticket, led me and Ann to a cart, then jerked a metal bar across our thighs. Closing my eyes, chin pressed against my chest, I tightened my grip on the bar as the Tilt-a-Whirl lurched into motion. Squeals and screeches echoed from the tip carts as gravity colluded with centrifugal forces to generate waves of chaotic rotation, a dizzying four or five minutes until the engine shuttered to a stop. I pushed the bar forward, staggered off the platform, my body still thrumming to the hollow, chirpy strains of oom-pah-pah music blaring from bullhorn speakers, then Ann and I walked to the Ferris wheel, where our grandmother sat on a bench, waiting to drive us back to our settled lives.
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Jean Coco’s essays have appeared in Ninth Letter online, New Delta Review, Hippocampus, Stone Canoe, and the Christian Science Monitor’s Home Forum. Her current project is a memoir-in-essays. A Louisiana native, she lives in Baton Rouge, where she scouts the curbs for still-good stuff to donate or repurpose. A few objects have appeared in her essays.
Photo by Dinty W. Moore
21 comments
Mary ann O'gorman says:
May 3, 2023
Lovely, Jean. “As gravity colluded with centrifugal force to generate waves of chaotic rotation”… A fantastic ending to this piece.
Jean Coco says:
May 3, 2023
Mary Ann, thank you for reading my piece and for giving me time to write at Twisted Run Retreat. I’ll be back soon.
Cynthia Peterson says:
May 3, 2023
Love this Jean. I never had this “Fair Kids” encounter. You have given such a vivid depiction with the delightful – and provocative – honesty and innocence that comes through a child’s perspective.
Jean Coco says:
May 4, 2023
Cynthia, I appreciate your reading and responding to my essay.
Blake Couch says:
May 3, 2023
So evocative … to see how the other half lives. It’s a beautiful, poignant memory you’ve written here, Jean.
Jean Coco says:
May 4, 2023
Thank you.
Lisa says:
May 3, 2023
Love the vivid descriptions. This essay brings back memories of our local fair decades ago.
Jean Coco says:
May 4, 2023
Thank you.
victoria Robertson says:
May 4, 2023
Thanks for reminding me of my elementary school Halloween carnival in Charlotte NC!! You captured an innocence & you reflected a sense of mystery around those worldly girls who traveled! The grass is always greener for we small town girls.
Jean Coco says:
May 4, 2023
Thanks for taking the time to read my piece.
Jane Dickinson says:
May 10, 2023
Really loved. I had a similar experience. I grew up in Western Monroe County, which at the time was very rural, and centered around Brockport State and agriculture. Every fall migrant children would come to school, and then disappear. They’d come back every fall. Some from kindergarten to graduation.
Stanley Wilder says:
May 4, 2023
This piece has a coming-of-age feel for me, wherein the new growth is an adult sense of empathy, compassion, and perspective. Such a beautifully drawn moment in time. My heart aches for the girl in Homeroom and the bunched girls at recess. And for the girl who learns to look past her child-like fantasy so as to see the fair kids in a new way.
Annette Couch says:
May 4, 2023
I loved this piece! It took me right to the 4H fair exhibits, the smell of the animal barns, the remote possibility of winning some fair treasure. It also perfectly captured that awareness of the haves and have nots.
Stanley Wilder says:
May 5, 2023
Also: I love that Brevity gave the piece the tag Tilt-A-Whirl! I almost searched to see what else this search would bring up, then decided no, I’d rather just imagine.
Bamini says:
May 5, 2023
Jean, for the minutes of reading this piece, I felt like I was back in that tilt a whirl enjoying every minute of it and noting those were the best days of our lives. So much fun and so carefree. But never once had I thought about the Fair Kids. Young and ignorant.
Rosemary Stagg says:
May 6, 2023
Took me back to life growing up in Jennings. Thanks, Jean.?
Al Masum says:
May 10, 2023
I really enjoyed reading this article about the “fair kids.” The author does a great job of capturing the sense of wonder and excitement that comes with the arrival of the fair, as well as the sense of isolation and loneliness that the fair kids experience. I was particularly struck by the line, “I envied them because I figured they got gobs of fair stuff for free: sideshow tickets, plush teddy bear prizes, corn dogs, cotton candy, all the fried funnel cakes they could eat.” It’s such a simple line, but it really captures the sense of longing that the author felt for the fair kids.
I also thought the author did a great job of exploring the different perspectives of the fair kids. We see them through the eyes of the author, as well as through the eyes of the other students at school. This gives us a more complete picture of the fair kids and their lives.
Overall, I thought this was a very well-written and insightful article. It’s a great reminder that everyone has a story, and that we should never judge someone based on their appearance or their circumstances.
Jean Coco says:
May 23, 2023
Al, I appreciate your close reading and thoughtful comments.
June says:
May 24, 2023
What vivid images this piece provoked! Its range of emotions was startling and effective. Reminds me that less is more in so many instances, all that was needed… nothing more… lovely.
Morgayne Kelley says:
Aug 4, 2023
I was one of those “fair kids”. We were full-timers who got maybe 2 months of school a year. We looked at you with the same wonder. A combination of both envy and pity for the stability you had. We had wild lives that broke under the gears of those machines.
Lovely writing.
Jean Coco says:
Nov 17, 2023
Thank you for responding to my story and for sharing your poignant words–“wild lives that broke under the gears. . .”