I’m on the elevator alone for one floor before the man gets on. He stands in one corner, staring at his phone. I drink my coffee. At the next floor, two more men get on. They flank me, laughing and talking about some game somewhere. I pull my arms in at my sides, try to become smaller. Two floors down, four more men. They take up so much space—their elbows out, their bags overfull with books, their legs spread to balance themselves—that I am pushed to the back of the elevator. I spill coffee on my shirt. Ten seconds to the bottom, I say to myself. Ten seconds. I can handle this.
And then I feel something on my bare arm, and I look over and it’s the finger of the man who is still staring at his phone. The other arm is crossed in front of him and now the knuckle of that hand is tracing a line down my arm. I want to pull away but there is nowhere to go. My backpack is pressing into the elevator wall. There are men all around me. There are all men and me. So I stare straight ahead. I drink my coffee. I let him touch me, because it could be worse, it could be worse, it could always be worse and then in the middle of the next sip of scalding coffee that I bring to my lips come the memories, descending on me like a flock of birds: the time when I was ten and a waiter cornered me in the dark restaurant hallway and ran a finger down the side of my breast and said wanna fuck—the time I was twelve and wore my first bikini to a pool party, and my father’s friend walked up and put his hand on my shoulder as he talked to my dad and with the other hand, pulled gently at the string of the bikini top, letting me know he could untie it any time he wanted—the time I was fourteen and in London on the Tube late at night and the drunk man got on and pressed his erection up against me again and again and I did nothing because I was terrified and then he stumbled off at the next stop—the time when I was sixteen, and the boy I thought was a friend grabbed my breast and kissed me with whiskey breath before I was able to push him away—and the time—and the time—the time the time the time the time and then the man turns and looks at me and the memories flutter and wing away.
There’s only him now, this man. Staring at me. Touching me. The other men are oblivious or are ignoring him, and I really don’t want to know which one it is. Then the man reaches up and picks up a lock of my hair and shakes it gently, and I remember the deer I saw on the interstate median on the way to work, how her body was populated by half a dozen vultures and how, while the others stuck their beaks into her skin, one plucked her ear up between its teeth and shook her head and her neck undulated like a ribbon, and I for a second I saw her face, the way her lips were pulled back from her teeth the way that lips do when the body is beginning to break itself down again into the dirt, and I thought she must be dead, mustn’t she?
But now I realize she wasn’t dead at all but just biding her time, waiting for the car that struck her to get far enough away that it would forget, waiting for a break in the traffic long enough for her to drag her bitten, broken body from the ground with enough force that the vultures will lift and clear and she can make a run for the woods. I turn and look at the man. My hair falls from his fingers. I pull my lips back and bare my teeth, and he actually smiles because he thinks that’s what I’m doing, and then I think of the deer’s mouth again and of course of course of course.
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Megan Pillow Davis is a graduate of the University of Iowa Writers’ Workshop in fiction and is currently a doctoral candidate in the University of Kentucky’s English Department. Her work has appeared recently in, among other places, Electric Literature, Hobart, SmokeLong Quarterly, and Paper Darts and is forthcoming in Pithead Chapel and Pidgeonholes. She has received fellowships from Pen Parentis and the Martha’s Vineyard Institute of Creative Writing and a residency from the Ragdale Foundation. She is currently writing her dissertation and a novel. You can find her on Twitter at @megpillow.
Photo by Elizabeth Fackler
23 comments
Kathleen says:
May 13, 2019
Exactly. She nailed it.
Suzanne Farrell Smith says:
May 13, 2019
Incredible piece. Powerful insight into an experience way too many of us know way too well.
Cheryl Marita says:
May 13, 2019
Great painful piece. Slow enough to let the reader squirm with pain.
Molly Howes says:
May 14, 2019
Terrible, wonderful unraveling of the realisation of everyday horror. Thank you.
Kathleen Quintano says:
May 14, 2019
Truth, like a knife in the gut.
norman belanger says:
May 15, 2019
brutal. true. i am forwarding this to every guy i know.
Marie Bailey says:
May 15, 2019
Perfectly written. My heart rate, my blood pressure rose with each word. I’m thinking, wouldn’t it have been perfect if you had “accidentally” scalded that finger with your coffee. I imagine myself thinking such a thing long after the opportunity has passed.
Kristine Jepsen says:
May 16, 2019
Wowza.
Jess says:
May 23, 2019
I keep thinking what if you had shouted “get your fucking hands off me.” I was assaulted on a crowded metro surrounded by men on their morning commute and I shouted “who the fuck is touching me” and the men around me laughed. I’ll never forget that. But I wasn’t terrified and the man with his fingers between my legs stopped. And the police never found him but I wasn’t terrified and the man with his fingers between my legs stopped. Every situation is different and scary but my wish for women is a little bit more of “get your fucking hands off of me” in a crowded elevator instead of writing essays about how terrified we are. We have a right to space and it’s time we owned it. We aren’t deer.
Erosen says:
Jun 3, 2019
Hey. Just so you know, women have gotten killed for doing literally just that, and freezing is a really common reaction especially for people who have had repeated trauma in their lives. A little less blaming victims for being afraid to stand up for themselves in a world where women are killed for rejecting men and a little more holding men responsible. Recognize that a good deal of that man stopping on the train was luck and that it easily could have gone another way. I know that’s a terrible and disempowering thought but it’s reality. How nice it would be if we lived in a world where assertively saying ‘stop’ was enough . . .
To the author: bravo.
Mary Hughes says:
Jun 18, 2019
You’re so honest here, I love it. What we would like to have done in these situations is never what we actually do. You’ve put it succinctly and with raw emotion. The beginning catches up with the ending nicely and the deer is just right
Peter Cloud says:
Jul 17, 2019
I hope the next time someone touches you like that in an elevator you slap the prick with all your might. Slap him and scream at him. Make a scene. Let him clearly know that you or any woman will not tolerate this.
jen says:
Jul 29, 2019
You are telling someone who is suffering from a PTSD episode you hope they ‘just get over it’, and telling a woman in a very low power situation to escalate an abusive situation – unfair & dangerous. Escalation can be the excuse to become violent; abusive men are waiting for it, hoping for it, so they can ‘teach that bitch a lesson’. It’s amazing that someone can read this, so well described, and still not understand just how vulnerable and powerless a position she is in.
Nels P. Highberg says:
Jul 19, 2019
In addition to the craft of this piece, it is a piece of documentation sorely needed in our culture right now.
Bonnie Parks says:
Jul 21, 2019
In my fantasy, you threw your hot coffee in his face. In reality you made the decision to survive. Kudos to you for walking away relatively unscathed.
Kristin says:
Jul 29, 2019
A powerful piece detailing a moment of seeming powerlessness. We all do what we can in the moment. I’ve been that silent, faking ignorance person — and I’ve been the laugh it off, play along person. And less often, I’ve been the go fuck your self person. All responses were valid choices in an impossibly teeth grinding situation.
Wonderful essay.
Jennifer says:
Aug 5, 2019
Thank you for bringing this to the page, and thank you Brevity for helping her bring it to the world. Beautiful, brave, and haunting. So well done. ~ JG
Amanda says:
Aug 16, 2019
Beautifully rendered piece that captures emotions to which I can relate. The writing is divine.
Cynthia Pittmann says:
Aug 23, 2019
Shaken. Disturbed. Yes, you captured the core truth.
Leslie Martin says:
Sep 10, 2019
Chilling, and reminiscent of so many such episodes in my own life. When the man’s finger first touched your arm, I was reminded of my favorite cartoon, by Jackie Urbanovic of Minneapolis, MN, circa 1978. It’s a woman on a bus or subway holding a man’s arm. She yells, “Whose hand is on my ass?” As others have mentioned, it’s not always the safest thing to do but it’s always been my fantasy. And it captures so much.
Suzanne LaFetra Collier says:
Sep 15, 2019
Brava
Josef Lemoine says:
Dec 23, 2019
I’m in awe of your writing and ability to reveal the world through your eyes. Connecting your experience to the deer is truly inspired. I will be returning to this piece often. Congratulations.
Barry L. Casey says:
Mar 28, 2020
Such a powerfully compressed and intense piece. Thank you for your courage in writing it. The link to the deer was disturbing and illuminating. Powerful images and metaphors. So worth multiple readings.