She’s never been good at word problems. She remembers hours of agony at the kitchen table, her father trying to help her wrench the variables of time, speed, and distance into manageable equations. “A freight train left San Diego and traveled east at an average speed of 28 mph. A diesel train left one hour later and traveled in the same direction but with an average speed of 33 mph. Find the number of hours the freight train traveled before the diesel train caught up.” No matter how long she stared at the problem, she couldn’t find a way in. Her father liked to think he was a patient man, but the longer he explained how to solve the problem, the more impatient he became, and the dumber she felt, until finally her brain froze and she stabbed the tabletop with her pencil until the point broke, and he shoved back his chair and walked outside to calm himself.
Now, at seventy, she can manage the simpler calculations. She knows she won’t be around to replace the thirty-year roof she’s just put on her house. She doesn’t need a dental implant that lasts fifty years. When she comes across a future date—the next total solar eclipse in 2052, for instance—she subtracts the present year from it to see whether she’ll be there, and the answer is usually no.
Other calculations are riskier. The word problems of life, she calls them. If a seventy-year-old woman owns two boxes of five-thousand staples and her stapler holds 210 staples per strip, how many staples must she use every day in order to empty both boxes before she dies? How long will it take her to write the pages she’ll staple, because even though she’s sometimes over-tired of the great harvest that she herself desired, she keeps harvesting, but slowly, so slowly, as if she still has all the time in the world?
What troubles her is that while those earlier word problems had answers, even if she couldn’t find them, these new problems always end with an unsolvable X—the date of her death. What troubles her is that those unsolvable Xs are multiplying. One morning last winter she left her house to talk to a group of writers about memoir—notes folded in her purse, directions entered in the GPS—and came-to in the emergency room, asking her son and her partner: What am I doing here? Who’s sick? Where’s the dog? For hours she asked those questions and for hours they patiently answered, but the answers wouldn’t stick. Transient Global Amnesia, the neurologist called it, a blown fuse in the brain that wipes out short-term memory and the ability to form new memories. And even though she jokes now that her brain just went to Jamaica for the day, the world seems full of Xs and holes she could tumble into anytime.
Thinking about those multiplying Xs makes her feel the way she felt, long ago in Catholic school, when the children were told to imagine eternity. Close your eyes, the nuns said, and imagine time flowing endlessly on and on, imagine forever, the place your immortal souls will go and stay. The exercise always made her feel hopeless and small. Eternity is not like wind; you can’t feel it on your face or see it in clouds and trees, flags, grass and sails. No earthly mirror can reflect eternity so how can our senses grasp it?
She hopes she still has time to stop breaking her heart with problems that can’t be solved. Sometimes she thinks she sees a way. She remembers returning to her father’s grave on the morning after his funeral. Over the last two terrible years of his life, she’d spoken to him or seen him almost every day, so going where he was seemed like the natural thing to do. It had rained overnight and pockets of water had collected in all four corners of the blue tent the funeral home had raised. She remembers how she pushed each sagging pocket, watched the water pour out and splash on the ground. She doesn’t know why it made her happy to spill the water that morning or why it makes her happy to remember it now, in spite of the grave.
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Pam Durban is the author of two collections of short stories, Soon and All Set About with Fever Trees, and three novels, The Laughing Place, So Far Back, and The Tree of Forgetfulness. Her stories and essays has been published in many magazines and anthologies including The Best American Short Stories of the Century, edited by John Updike, and The Pushcart Prize, Best of the Small Presses. She is the recipient of a National Endowment for the Arts Creative Writing Fellowship and a Whiting Writer’s Award as well as the 2001 Lillian Smith Award for Fiction for her novel, So Far Back. She lives in Chapel Hill, NC, and teaches at the University of North Carolina.
Artwork by John Gallaher
41 comments
Jan Priddy says:
May 16, 2018
You had me at the title, the mathematics of our personal futures. Thank you.
Pam Durban says:
May 18, 2018
Thank you for your kind response. I love titles that really set you on a story’s path, and I’m glad this one did that for you.
Jan Priddy says:
Sep 23, 2018
I went looking for your work. So Far Back blew me away. You accomplished something rare and significant in that novel. Thank you!
Pam Durban says:
Jun 8, 2020
Thanks for reading So Far Back, Jan, and for your comment. I’m a southerner by birth, and southern history is a subject that I’m committed to trying to get right, and I’m grateful for your response.
Nicole says:
May 16, 2018
This is a beautiful piece, Pam. Thank you.
Pam Durban says:
May 18, 2018
Thanks, Nicole. I love this flash essay form, and I’m glad this one succeeded with you.
Tree says:
May 17, 2018
I loved this interweaving of mathematics and life. I always knew somehow I’d need to know basic algebra.
Pam Durban says:
May 18, 2018
Me, too, Tree, but somehow it eluded me until now. Thanks for taking the time to comment on my piece.
Jack Peachum says:
May 18, 2018
Dyskalulia– I have suffered it all my life. Nothing to do w/ age, the math equivalent of dyslexia. It is a fatal burden in a techno-mathematical age.
Jack Peachum says:
May 18, 2018
Dyskalulia: the psychological equivalent OF Dyslexia and likely to prove near-fatal in a techo-mathematical-oriented age.
marcia aldrich says:
May 18, 2018
Sobering. Brings me up sharp. What good writing should do.
Ceci LaDuca says:
May 21, 2018
I love your essay. I’m 70 also. Do I have 15 good years left? Who knows. I try not to think about how fast the past 15 yrs have gone, and just live. Besides, maybe I’ll live to be 100! Anyway, I really related to the piece.
Pam Durban says:
May 22, 2018
Thanks for your kind comment, Ceci. It is strange,isn’t it, to find ourselves facing all those unsolvable Xs.
Bob HIll says:
May 28, 2018
Hi, Pam. A pleasure to read this new piece of yours in BREVITY. Hope you’re well.
–Bob HIll, [email protected]
Nancy Glover says:
May 25, 2018
I’ve tried to write about that word problem frustration — but connecting it to “the final word problem” — wow! Well done!
Diane Esser says:
May 26, 2018
Good writing creates another furrow in our cranium. I am also 70 and welcomed another furrow:)
daisy hernandez says:
May 30, 2018
I read it before realizing it was yours, Pam! So fun when that happens. That ending is so poignant.
Harold Macy says:
Jun 2, 2018
In the brick schoolhouse where I was faced with these goddamn trains the only way I could even approach the problem was to grab two pencils and move them at the noted speeds, one slower, one faster usually, until they crossed paths or collided then I estimated the answer and was always wrong though my methodology brought some slight smile to the teacher’s stern visage and I sat there picturing the gory scene of a train wreck with shattered bodies everywhere in the same numbers as this stupid algebra class.
Basira Harpster says:
Jul 1, 2018
How lovely to read a piece reflecting this part of life. I almost said this end of life, but it’s not the end yet, not 70, not if we keep being lucky. I admire the turns in the piece and the ending image, which reaches nicely beyond logic.
Jacqueline King says:
Jul 12, 2018
Thank you for making me feel not alone in this journey! I relate to your writing, love your story and descriptive details that make everything real.
Pam Durban says:
Jul 17, 2018
Thank you to everyone who’s commented on my story. I’m especially grateful if, as Jacqueline King said, I helped you feel “not alone in this journey.”
steve rosse says:
Jul 17, 2018
“…stories and essays has been published…”
Leslie Knowlton says:
Jul 18, 2018
Wonderful. Reading this on the morning of my 66th birthday and seeing these thoughts articulated is such a gift. Thank you.
Jane Hilberry says:
Jul 18, 2018
Lovely piece–I especially enjoy the movement, the unexpected turns, as when Catholic school and the nuns come into the piece, and that unexpected sensory detail of the water collecting in the corners of the tent at the grave.
Rebecca Gummere says:
Jul 19, 2018
Amazing.
Sejal A. Shah says:
Jul 21, 2018
Very moving. Thank you.
Annie says:
Jul 23, 2018
I am worried that when a small but reliable percentage of American boys and girls no longer go to Catholic schools, literature will suffer.
Nancy Brier says:
Sep 8, 2018
I loved the language arts training I learned from my nuns, but sadly, my priest was like so many we read about in the news. All the great literature in the universe isn’t worth it.
Dina Santorelli says:
Aug 7, 2018
A colleague of mine mentioned Brevity last week and thought I’d like it. This essay was my first stop, and it was lovely. If this is any indication of the type of writing I’ll find here, I’ll be back often. Thank you so much for such a well-written and thoughtful piece.
Nancy Brier says:
Sep 8, 2018
The “unsolvable X.” Such a succinct and beautiful way to describe the mysterious unknown we all have to live with. I love this piece.
Jerry Shao says:
Sep 17, 2018
Actually t’s pretty interesting to use “X” to symbolize the problems in our lives. And those “unsolvable X” can definitely represent both the image of these problems and the emotion that people may have when they face those problems. Thanks for such an interesting thought.
Julia Joyce says:
Sep 18, 2018
Few pieces have the ability to shift from the seemingly mundane of math homework to the deep and life-altering why’s of life, but this one achieves it seamlessly and poignantly. As someone who also went to Catholic school, the moment with the nuns brought a smile to my face. Your pieces weaves a complex tapestry of life, well done.
Ryan Yoshioka says:
Sep 18, 2018
Thank you for this intriguing piece- I loved the pace of your writing and how it flowed from her at a young age, to seventy years old, to being diagnosed with amnesia, to happily watching the water fall to the ground. All the while there were these uncertainties, or unsolvable X’s, that she could never solve. It was a building suspense carried throughout this piece that kept me hooked. I loved how in the end she could enjoy seeing the water from the corner of the tent fall to the ground. The first time she could see something all the way through, as if all her unsolvable X’s were solved with the splash of the water against the ground.
Christopher Sung says:
Sep 18, 2018
Amazing piece. From the beginning of it, I was already captivated by the story about a seemingly regular task, solving a math problem. I love how this task of solving a math problem, more specifically, solving for an “X” value is paralleled to our real life problems. The strongest moment for me in this piece was how you highlighted that “word problems had answers, even if she couldn’t find them, these new problems always end with an unsolvable X—the date of her death.” This made me think of how all people have the same unsolvable X, and made me realize that you don’t necessarily need to find an answer to this X like you do in a word problem. Relating this to my own life, I know that this unsolvable X exists, so rather than having anxieties about figuring out when, I think we should all just enjoy the moments that are happening in the moment, like the happy spill of water she remembered from her memories,
Kelsie Barnard says:
Sep 18, 2018
I found this piece to be extremely clever and exciting to read. I have always found solace in mathematical problems since they have a definite answer waiting to be found. Solving for X in an equation becomes almost cathartic, like reaching a destination after a long period of travel. The way you write about X being unsolvable in the equation of your life is emotion-provoking. The line, “She hopes she still has time to stop breaking her heart with problems that can’t be solved,” makes me put my life in perspective. Reading this story as a 20 year old makes me think about how I want to live my life. I definitely don’t want to solve all of the Xs in my life but I want to put my effort into solving those that are worth it.
Dan says:
Sep 19, 2018
I liked the juxtaposition of describing things and situations with finite end dates (the next solar eclipse, dental implants, staples) with the imagery of the nuns and imagining eternity. It was interesting to hear how the narrator struggled with the imagery of eternity and how she found it troubling when one might think that the nuns intended it to be calming and peaceful. The last piece of imagery in which she pushes the water from the tarp presents a simple and straightforward problem for the character of the piece to solve. Perhaps this is why it makes her happy; it’s easy to figure out and it can be solved and shouldn’t break her heart.
Yuan Wang says:
Sep 19, 2018
This piece really established a meaning of life by connecting life with mathematics. For me, the unsolvable X are those unpredictable things in the real life. Similar to the equation with no sufficient variables, the meaning of life cannot be solved with enough experiences and time.
Katrina Samonte says:
Sep 19, 2018
I love how you related life with mathematics. With Mathematics being so integrated into our lives, from academics to everyday activities, I feel as if it is the perfect comparison. Everyone has an “unsolvable X” in their lives, but I feel as if it adds to the beauty of the mystery of life.
Melanie L Griffin says:
Nov 15, 2018
Very nice – congrats on the Pushcart nomination. Well-deserved. This is an excellent example of the personal conveying the universal in so many ways. I can definitely relate! So much going on in such a short piece. Thanks!
Aida L Rogers says:
Jun 21, 2019
As with anything so beautiful (and meaningful), this stops me short. The pause before the last note of the music ends and the applause begins.
Pam Durban says:
Jun 8, 2020
Thanks so much, Aida. Would love to see you again when this world rights itself again.