he waves whenever I walk by. He lives four blocks away, and he lets the neighbor dogs poop in his yard. He lets mine. That says all you need to know about him, or all I needed to know. To say it’s okay for an animal to crap on your lawn is to say we all have needs and can’t always manage the timing, is to say sometimes it’s best to start with forgiveness as Jimmy always does, is to say that to allow something to happen as it’s meant to is easier than trying to stop it. Jimmy’s mother paid her bills last week. That’s what Jimmy tells me after I put on my funeral home sweater set and black slacks and drive to work and stand in the lobby across from him just after he’s arrived for his mother’s visitation. It’s the most I’ve ever talked to him. It’s the most I can do right now. His mother paid her bills all on her own, he says, and she had just seen the cardiologist a few days ago and her blood pressure couldn’t be better, her heart beat the right number of times and thumped correctly, which is to say Jimmy was caught off guard when his mother slipped from the bed. He called 911 and the ambulance roared her to the hospital. She didn’t last long. Jimmy stands there, his hands fiddling the air as he tells me his story, which most people want to do, of the one he loved and how he lost her, how he didn’t see it coming. Do any of us see what is coming? The windows of this lobby are wide and tall, taking in the whole of the parking lot and the streets and that intersection—a four-way stop—that you must go through to get here. This, the place of stop and go. This, the place of goodbye. This, the place where Jimmy tells me the story that will become his most important story yet while all the light pours in, as do the coming hours and days, unwilling to halt, unwilling to be managed by anyone, unwilling to do anything but ask our forgiveness for what they take from us, for what they leave behind.
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Shuly Xóchitl Cawood writes, teaches, and doodles—all while raising two party poodles and a dwindling number of orchids. She is an award-winning author of six books that span multiple genres: creative nonfiction (memoir and flash essays), short fiction, and poetry.
Artwork by Michael Todd Cohen

29 comments
Susan O'Dell Underwood says:
Jan 15, 2026
Shuly, Thank you for this beautiful piece!
Shuly says:
Jan 16, 2026
Thank you so much for this generous comment. THANK YOU!
Jillian Mckelvey says:
Jan 16, 2026
Shuly,
I read your powerful essay many times. The second time through, I read it aloud to further enjoy the rhythm, the cadence, the repetition. The power of the repetition reminded me of Richard Wright’s, Black Boy, one of my favourite books.
Your opening, with the dog pooping, cracked me up. Partially because I am a fanatical dog person, partly because it is so unique, and mostly because you offer the reader what Jimmy’s actions say about him. And the reader, or at least this reader, says wow, yeah, of course, what a cool guy.
I love how all your words matter and how the opening segue’s seamlessly (part way through) to the heart of the story. You make it look easy. Ha! You interpret the story behind the words with the simple expression “which is to say,” and it is a compelling thread throughout. And the reader imagines this has long been a big part of the protagonist’s story given her profession.
I love how you use the word “yet,” so small, but so important, and the days ahead that continue to roll, even when people feel they can’t, and somehow you come up with an ending that pauses breath.
I believe reading great writing is the best mentor of all. I will keep your essay close.
Thank you,
Jillian
Shuly Cawood says:
Feb 17, 2026
Jillian: Thank you for this VERY CLOSE READ! And thank you for your wonderful comments. I really appreciate them. –Shuly Cawood
Susan Harris Howell says:
Jan 16, 2026
Lovely.
Shuly Cawood says:
Feb 17, 2026
Thank you, Susan!
Miriam says:
Jan 17, 2026
This is beautiful. Exquisitely written and so true. Thank you, Shuly
Shuly Cawood says:
Feb 17, 2026
Thank you so much, Miriam!
Miriam says:
Jan 17, 2026
Thank you, Shuly. Exquisitely written and so true.
Shuly Cawood says:
Feb 19, 2026
Thank you so much!
–Shuly
Amelia says:
Jan 19, 2026
Shuly, you perfectly encapsulate the beauty of life and why it makes it worth experiencing. There’s not too much we can control about it but instead we have to embrace it for what it is and push forth. I wish that Jimmy was my neighbor too.
Shuly Cawood says:
Feb 19, 2026
Thank you, Amelia. We are lucky to have Jimmy as a neighbor.
Jennifer Gaites says:
Jan 20, 2026
This is just beautiful.
Shuly Cawood says:
Feb 17, 2026
Thank you, Jennifer.
Marjie says:
Jan 21, 2026
Lovely is the word for this – I read it several times just to be in it. Thank you.
Shuly Cawood says:
Feb 19, 2026
Thank you so much!
Justine Busto says:
Feb 3, 2026
Shuly, this is such a surprising, exhilarating piece. We just read it together in Pen to Paper at Charlotte Lit. I’m thankful to Paula Martinac for bringing it to us, and to you for writing it. What depth of feeling and grace you elicit in the reader.
– Justine B
Shuly Cawood says:
Feb 19, 2026
I am so honored you all read it together at Charlotte Lit. Please thank Paula for me.
Sara H.I. says:
Feb 12, 2026
Your writing really drew me in, and I love the balance between hopeful and melancholy. Thank you for sharing your work.
Shuly Cawood says:
Feb 19, 2026
Thank you for reading it, Sara, and for your comments.
–Shuly
Rachel Lutwick-Deaner says:
Feb 18, 2026
Love this, Shuly.
Shuly Cawood says:
Feb 19, 2026
Thank you so much, Rachel!
–Shuly
Jennifer Cloer says:
Feb 21, 2026
So much inside this short piece. What beauty and craft!
Phoebe says:
Feb 24, 2026
I feel kinda bad for Jimmy. Everyone dumps on him. Literally. And then his mom died.
Your piece made me feel. I’m not sure it’s beauty.
Stephanie Shafran says:
Feb 24, 2026
Shuly,
I love the vivid portraiture of Jimmy that precedes the poignant scene at the funeral home between him and the narrator. Your writing is both exquisitely accessible and surprising at the same time. Bravo!
Amy Jane Lynch says:
Feb 24, 2026
This piece does soooo much in just a few words. I went with you on the journey you created, and was moved to compassion. Thank you! I also thought of the story I told about my father’s death. And your final sentences about forgiveness and taking and leaving —- perfect.
Nina Craig says:
Feb 25, 2026
what Jillian said.
aman says:
Mar 16, 2026
The metaphor of the four-way stop is striking. You’ve captured the intersection of the mundane—paying bills and blood pressure checks—with the monumental event of a final goodbye. Your description of time as something ‘unwilling to be managed’ and asking for our ‘forgiveness for what they take’ is a powerful perspective on grief. A deeply moving read
Marlene Cullen says:
Mar 23, 2026
So many things to say about this brilliant writing. I have read this many times and am delighted when I pick up new nuances each time. A treat to read and re-read.