There she is, Mary Doyle, and another right beside her. Heads turned for one last view of land before the Cork coastline slips out of sight. Dishwater strands pushed behind her ears, yellow curls pulled up under a hat, dark frizz flying in the wind. She is seventeen. She is twenty-two. She is just yesterday turned twenty-nine. Look at her now, studying the sky in place of crying, trying to remember what everyone has said, begging Mary-the-most-holy-mother-of-God they might make it across the ocean alive.
She leaves behind her favorite cow and the kitchen garden she’s been fighting for years. She leaves behind her mother’s grave, her sister’s face, her Uncle Timmo’s way with the plow. She leaves behind the traveling priest, the Sunday Masses, and the words to every song she knows, my apple tree, my brightness, and oh ro, soon shall I see them, the pretty laments and the keening, and Mr. Byrne with the tin whistle, and here it comes now, her father’s hand, swollen and cracked as it is, the way he held it to her, her father’s hand, soft as old cloth against her cheek.
She leaves behind the big house on the hill and the splintered wheel leaning against Coughlan’s cottage, will it oh will it ever get fixed? And the marsh violet and the burnet rose and the blackthorn too sometimes, the patchwork of fields, and the baby Lizzie with her dark eyes and funny ways—what will the little one be like as she grows? And the Abbey, of course, what times they had there, the slick moss and cold stone, and her best friend, Birdy, who swears upon her life she will write but both girls know how these things go, a few long letters at first, the distance between them widening as the world settles into the spaces made by those who leave until words are folded less often into envelopes, because if there’s one thing everyone knows it’s that when someone leaves Ballyhaunis, sure enough, she’s gone for good.
Mary Doyle.
Come from Moycullen from Westmeath and Usher’s Quay. Come from Poulnamuck, Gweesalia, and Tourmakeady. From Clongeen, Collooney, and Cahermanger. From Kilkelly and Kilmeena, Ballina and Bonniconlon. From Portlaoise, Mountshannon and Roscommon. From Donoughmore, Dún Laoghaire, and Drogheda.
That one there with the reddish hair, the tall one with the over-proud back, the one gone flat against the rail, trying her best to hide the sight of a broken shoe under her trunk, fan of fingers placed upon her brow. That one. And that one. And then again that one too. Sailed in 1851. Sailed in 1847. Left from Queenstown in 1869.
See her now, stepping from the gangway, swaying a bit as her feet reach solid land. That’s her there, scanning the crowd for the sight of a familiar face. And here we are. We can’t call out, yet she stands before us on a ship. Every girl bound for Boston, New York, and the upper St. Lawrence. Let us stop now and into look into her face, if only in this moment, for she belongs to each of us does our girl Mary Doyle.
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Sonja Livingston’s memoir Ghostbread, won an AWP Book Prize for Nonfiction. She has an essay collection forthcoming from University of Nebraska Press in early 2015 and is completing another collection inspired by the lives of little known women, from which this essay comes. Sonja’s essays have appeared in journals such as the Iowa Review, Arts & Letters, Seneca Review and Creative Nonfiction, and have earned a NYFA Fellowship in Nonfiction Literature, an Iowa Review Award, and the Susan Atefat Essay Prize. Sonja teaches in the MFA Program at the University of Memphis. Sonja offers some background on her inspiration for this essay and an intriguing writing prompt at the Brevity blog.
14 comments
steve carpenter says:
May 9, 2014
I had two great grandmothers who were bond servants in the 1870s from Ireland. This certainly breathes life into them.
Kerri Harris says:
May 10, 2014
Hi, Sonya. I loved your story ‘A Thousand Mary Doyles’. The title says so much and put me in mind of a childhood neighbour – Mary Doyle – and all those Mary Doyles who bravely made that journey from Ireland possibly never to see their families again. I am also writing an historic fiction novel with a modern edge and I found your story today simply inspiring. Best wishes, Kerri Harris. (Brisbane, Australia)
Greta McDonough says:
May 13, 2014
Oh, my. I had to sit for a moment, after reading this. Thank you.
The Opposite of the Composite: How One Girl Became a Thousand | BREVITY's Nonfiction Blog says:
May 14, 2014
[…] Livingston discusses the origins of her recent Brevity essay, “A Thousand Mary Doyles,” and offers an intriguing writing prompt for other […]
Kim Adrian says:
May 14, 2014
just beautiful. amazing how the thoughts create the actual physical movement away. and how the narrator takes these micro/macro views. very acrobatic…
Elizabeth Gaucher says:
May 14, 2014
I write a lot about ancestors I never knew, and I really appreciate what you’ve done here. Thank you.
Jacqueline Doyle says:
May 14, 2014
So moving. So powerful. All the Marys and the worlds they leave behind come alive. Thank you for this.
Karen says:
May 15, 2014
Livingston offers a snapshot view of a character with such flair, I get to “know” Mary Doyle (and all the Mary Doyles out there). The writing is crisp, clear and perfectly executed. I can’t wait for Livingston’s collection of little known women to hit the market. This is essay is exceptional!!!
Sonja Livingston says:
May 19, 2014
Thanks to each of you for reading and responding, and best of luck with your own work!
An update and a brief digression | Miss Fickle Reader says:
May 23, 2014
[…] which looks at the lives of disability activists; and Sonja Livingston’s “A Thousand Mary Doyles,” which encapsulates the experience of all the Mary Doyles who immigrated to the U.S. in the […]
Sally Steinwachs says:
Jun 4, 2014
My father taught, “each of us is but a grain of sand (on a very big beach).” As herstory unfolds (a term I picked up in the 1970’s living among the feminists in lower Manhattan), and I grow older, my wisdom informs me that I play just a part. But I love this part, don’t I? And want it to be more than just a grain of sand.
Elizabeth Osta says:
Aug 11, 2014
I just reread this and find it remarkable. This Mary Doyle belongs to all of us who are descendants of those brave woman and men who emigrated, risking everything. Sometimes they made it and had a great life and others put to rest in the St. Lawrence..or in mass graves on Grosse Ile. I love this Mary Doyle as i love my own Maggie Buckley. =elizabeth osta
enid flaherty says:
Sep 9, 2014
sonja – beautifully written. at quinnipiac university in hamden connecticut is a stunnning small museum “an gorta mor” the great hunger, with hundreds of photos and documents from the famine years and the emigration from ireland. our ancestors are there somewhere and it is heartbreaking.
Chandler says:
Jul 28, 2016
I loved the story but it was hard for me to understand some of it, but thats probably just me im not the best reader, but from what I understood from your story it was really good.