I’ve dumped nearly everything from my car’s glove box—registration, flashlight, crusty hair ties—while I paw around for a tool to open a bottle of wine. This bottle of wine, the first screwtop I spotted in 7-11 and purchased in a rush. My hands aren’t strong enough for the feeble job of unscrewing (as if I need another reminder of weakness right now) so I search for rusty pliers or a nail file and when there’s nothing like that, I resort to my teeth. Clenched molars that zing when I press on the flimsy aluminum until, ahh, the threads give way. It had to be the teeth, as I was not returning to the store where someone might see me, where one of the other women could pop in for milk or a pack of cigarettes she’s keeping secret from her kids. It’s these other women who’ve done the yeoman’s work for the past year, the ones who’ll wonder why I’m falling apart after one turn of taking our mutual friend to her chemo appointment. They do it all the time. There’s a three-month schedule pinned on our friend’s fridge and my name, scratched in a few slots, is buried under heaps of these others. Women more noble, more available, more resilient. I have my reasons—a husband at home with cancer, and that home a fifty-mile drive from town—but excuses are as useless as gum stuck in my hair, so I start the car and drive to a school lot to hide from everyone. I lower my seat in the darkness, and take a first swig of wine, which I’d promised myself around noon, after the doctor stepped in and asked my friend, again, about this most drastic treatment in a series of drastic treatments. Are you sure? Whatever six-syllable poisons would be gushed into her thoracic cavity came with a guarantee of unbearable, yet my darling friend, pumped full of anti-nausea and pain drugs, with ice packs around her middle and my hands rubbing her feet, got on her elbows with wild hair sprung around a face that had begun to cave in, said yes. Yes, Yes, absolutely yes. Give it to me. She wanted to live.
This friend and my husband were diagnosed on the same day, both metastatic. I can’t get over that. He and I left the doctor’s office with a folder of bitter news and appointment slips and drove to a café to order lunches that neither of us touched. After our daughters, I knew who I wanted to speak to, to be comforted by. But when I called, my friend delivered a tale of a gnarlier cancer and a withering prognosis. I remember walking with her some months later, when she still had the strength to be outside. I told her my husband’s doctor predicted he’d live only another two or three years. She stopped on the sidewalk and jerked toward me. “Do you know what I would give for two more years?”
Another swig and I’m done. I’d planned on chugging the bottle, forgetting I’m a lightweight when it comes to alcohol. Instead I call another friend and ask if I can stay with her rather than make the hour drive home. Of course. I’ll tell my husband I’m too tired to drive, because I am. I won’t say that I cannot bear for him to see my face, to touch my cold fingers. Even my voice might give me away. I’m petrified—that word from childhood describing a fear beyond all fears. My friend humped on the chemo bed, those noises emerging from her: how can I admit I let myself pretend it was sweaty, pulsing flesh suffering before me and not a human, not a human I love. I got her out of the clinic and home to her bed; I sat there until she fell asleep. Only then could I say her name again.
I open the car door to set the bottle in the parking lot for someone else’s terrible night and cold air slaps at me, jars me. Today I saw what’s coming for my husband, for us. I saw its ruthlessness. And it saw me gripping the bars of my friend’s bed, unable to move or to swallow. I saw how it rises from the belly of the innate desire to survive, the willingness to endure nearly anything for a chance to live on.
Standing before it, I was small. I was so very small.
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Debra Gwartney is the author of I Am a Stranger Here Myself, winner of the River Teeth Nonfiction Prize and the Willa Award. Her first memoir, Live Through This, was a finalist for the National Book Critics Circle Award. Debra has published in such journals as Tin House, Granta, VQR, American Scholar, Prairie Schooner, Creative Nonfiction, and others. Her essay “Suffer Me To Pass,” won a Pushcart Prize last year, and her essay “Fire and Ice,” was recently selected for Best American Essays 2022.
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24 comments
Marie Daniely says:
May 24, 2022
OMG. This story is so intense, visceral. Beautifully and brutally written. Compassionate and heartbreaking. The story definitely hit and moved its target.
Peggy Shumaker says:
May 24, 2022
Oh, Debra. How small, how tiny we are. And yet your love is huge, sky wide, all-encompassing. Thank you for this.
Debra says:
May 24, 2022
XO, Peggy. You are much on my mind.
Jennifer Hurst says:
May 24, 2022
Oh, Debra, how accurate and lonely. Thank you. The linoleum-tread stairwell where I hid after the diagnosis, the nurse I savaged for suggesting we have fewer visitors, the bed I slept in alone. Relief, we want relief, and none is reliable. I love you, sweet woman. Thank you for writing for us.
Debra Gwartney says:
May 24, 2022
Xo, dear Jennifer.
Jenn Powers says:
May 24, 2022
This story hit me where it’s supposed to. Amazing work.
Bethany Jarmul says:
May 25, 2022
Wow! So powerful! Thank you for writing this and sharing it with the world.
Cassandra Hamilton says:
May 25, 2022
Gorgeous storytelling on loving while facing the god awful.
Luis Carlos Gutierrez says:
May 25, 2022
Concise, yes, but also direct, with no concessions. That’s it.
Deborah Dombrowski says:
May 28, 2022
This is an amazing evocation of what it’s like. it’s terrifying.
so sweet says:
Jun 14, 2022
Gorgeous storytelling on loving while facing the god awful.
Jonathan F. Jones says:
Jun 22, 2022
Powerful writing, it touched me deeply. You, your husband and friend are in my prayers.
Carolyn Tripp says:
Jun 22, 2022
Very powerful. Raw, revealing, and beautiful. As one who has also lost a loved one to cancer, these crafted words are extremely meaningful.
so sweet says:
Jun 24, 2022
Wow! So powerful! Thank you for writing this and sharing it with the world.
Anne Kaye says:
Jul 11, 2022
Stunning! What a powerful piece.
kimsa says:
Jul 24, 2022
Peggy. You are much on my mind.
Top Writers says:
Jul 29, 2022
Thanks for sharing…..
Katherine Grasso says:
Aug 16, 2022
Wow. Thank you for this.
harry says:
Aug 20, 2022
Beautiful. Heartbreaking. Intense.
sepehrr says:
Sep 3, 2022
If you can keep your head when all about you
Are losing theirs and blaming it on you,
If you can trust yourself when all men doubt you,
But make allowance for their doubting too;
If you can wait and not be tired by waiting,
Or being lied about, don’t deal in lies,
Or being hated, don’t give way to hating,
And yet don’t look too good, nor talk too wise:
gudanglagu123 says:
Sep 4, 2022
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G.Rajesh says:
Sep 9, 2022
Thanking You
Stpehen Graanzyk says:
Nov 10, 2022
I came to this after reading “Fire and Ice,” which moved me deeply. I love that you are fearless in painting impossible situations so vividly and yet overall make it clear how we are capable of being so desperate to live and to maintain th worth of our lives and those of the people we love. I know part of Future and Ice was your revolution of doubts about your own talent. I hope those doubts will be surmounted as your ability as a writer is unquestioned in my mind.
Debra Gwartney says:
Jan 23, 2023
I am very late in finding your comment—apologies. Your words mean a lot to me. Thank you.