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  1. adriana
    April 19, 2016

    I don’t usually leave comments but this was a very skillfully written story. There is subtlety here and the form it takes is also really working. The lines of the message interspersed within the live action of the narrator. Great story.


  2. Miss Rainey
    June 27, 2019

    Wow! I was on the edge of my seat all the way! Such an interesting CNF concept in writing. The voicemail dialogue interspersed with activities set a twist on imagery. Wonderful story!


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