- Waking in the dark.
- Dressing in the dark.
- Reviewing the checklist of things to remember.
- Driving on icy roads. Unloading the luggage, kissing goodbye.
- Showing identification, checking bags.
- Removing coat, removing shoes, watch, jewelry.
- Aimless browsing in airport shops, hoping a snack might look appealing at 6 a.m. or a magazine catch the eye.
- Waiting, hours of waiting.
- The boarding call, jockeying for position.
Now we are at a standstill, stalled in the hallway that connects the terminal with the accordion-sleeve that, in turn, connects to the plane. We can almost, but not quite, see the door opening to the cabin. Passengers make small talk, adjust carry-on bags, fold baby strollers, double-check boarding passes.
A party of five is vocal and animated. Four adults, one child. Parents and grandparents, three generations. The child’s every need is noticed and addressed. Lollipop, book, toy. Remove gloves, put on gloves. Make her laugh, tie her shoe. In another country, the child would be a princess. She would have servants to wipe candy from her delicate cheek, to carefully clean the stickiness from between her fingers. She barely blinks; a new need is diagnosed and fulfilled.
When the adults aren’t looking—she recognizes this with finely honed instinct—she quickly, quietly, secretly, licks the wall. It must be alive with germs. It must taste heavenly, as forbidden things do.
I am the only one who witnesses. We make eye contact. She smiles. She has found a way to have a life.
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Donna Steiner’s essays and poetry have been published in literary journals including Fourth Genre, The Bellingham Review, The Sun, Full Grown People and The Manifest Station. She teaches literary citizenship and creative writing at the State University of New York in Oswego. A chapbook of five essays, Elements, was released by Sweet Publications.
Photo by Heather Kresge
6 comments
Linda Loomis says:
May 16, 2017
“…as forbidden things do.” A secret act noticed only by the writer comes alive in a few well-chosen words and a beautifully crafted image. Donna Steiner can make a moment shimmer.
Nicole says:
Jun 28, 2017
I read this essay a few days ago, and I keep thinking about it as I watch my three-year-old son navigate his days. He is always waiting for a moment like this to “have a life.” I love writing like that resonates long after my first read. Thank you!
Josephine Cannella says:
Jul 16, 2017
I shared this with eighth race students, reading aloud, building so easily to that climactic moment. My students were both disgusted and enthralled. It was an excellent and approachable introduction to powerful creative nonfiction. I love the build up to the central moment, followed by an attachment of developed meaning. Thank you for this excellent piece!
Ilona says:
Aug 6, 2017
Love, love, love this story. Made me laugh….
Dave says:
Aug 23, 2017
THis is pretty Kool!
Daniel says:
Oct 5, 2017
Yummy, terminal wall!
Good story. I love how the plight for this child to be able to make her own decisions results in her simply licking the wall. It sometimes feels like that as a student, and I’m sure it carries on into adulthood. You have so many responsibilities and people relying on you and pressure to do what you are told that sometimes, what we do eventually get to do on our own in our brief moments of independence, seems absurd or silly to others.
Did I steal any of your thoughts Sam? 😉