5 responses

  1. Jan Priddy
    January 20, 2020

    There are always many ways to tell a story. This one is about trying to find the place where a man murdered and ate his traveling companions. I admire the author’s accumulation of details and how they lead the reader to to a better place.


  2. Fred Towne
    January 24, 2020

    Really nice job Mary. The underlying story and its payoff.


  3. Marie
    January 30, 2020

    Great writing! Every part of this felt just right leading to the next. Packed with metaphor and meaning. Finding the swing station and the narration from there is powerful and well executed.


  4. David McGirt
    April 4, 2020

    I like the validation and confirmation that something might have happened way back when and most certainly happened then.


  5. Jacob Paul
    April 17, 2020

    This is lovely! I love the contrast between awe of nature and tension with your partner. And The words have such a nice rhythm: “Clumps of Colorado blue columbine”


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