8 responses

  1. Joanne
    February 18, 2016

    Brenda, I’m curious to know how much time you spent on revisions with this piece.


  2. Hayley
    December 14, 2017

    This is one of my favorite essays. Ever.


  3. Shelly
    January 1, 2021

    I love this essay and plan to use it in my creative writing class next fall and ask students to imitate the buildup of tension in the relationship.


  4. Dumbo
    January 5, 2021

    I think this good


  5. Mrs. Ryan-Lofy
    January 5, 2021

    This is a great braided essay!


  6. Mrs. Ryan-Lofy
    January 6, 2021

    I share this with my class, great work Brenda. I hope you can someday look over my writing!


  7. Jacob
    November 8, 2021

    This is an amazing essay!


  8. Amanda
    September 23, 2022

    Oh, this gutted me! I’m still learning not to apologize— to say “thank you” instead. So thank you for sharing this subject so eloquently.


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