5 responses

  1. Lynn Wade
    September 16, 2019

    WOW!! I absoultey love it!! I was so into everything you wrote, like it was happening right in front of me!! It’s amazing Son!! Very, very talented!!!!


  2. Anne McGrath
    September 17, 2019

    Not relying on shocking experiences alone, I love how this writer turns his gaze to focus on something small in the periphery—a packed U-Haul, a face like my face, a pink dress and tinfoil tiara—to give new meaning and depth to the violence.


  3. larry
    September 17, 2019

    Interesting how it does not appear the narrator committed any violence himself. Well written piece. Grabbed me and would not let go.


  4. Sandy Brand
    October 5, 2019

    a face like my face with a heart just as broken….. that totally got me. Thanks


  5. anonymous
    September 17, 2020

    i love this so much its so interesting


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