8 responses

  1. ryder ziebarth
    May 10, 2014

    Unique words and phrases used to describe all sorts of things;gray wool weather,lingering in the penumbral past, whirls in the thermals, spinning across, micro bursting with anger; Fantastically written. Thank you!


  2. Tim Hillegonds
    May 21, 2014

    Loved this, Steven. “I’ll blow out the twig candles and eat the whole fragile thing in front of her.” Brilliant line.


  3. Darrelyn Saloom
    May 30, 2014

    Love “the sky hanging just over our heads as if we are children beneath a parachute.”


  4. Jake
    June 11, 2014

    I love this. The dense, unbroken prose make the images begin to blur together as if they are becoming part of the grey fog as well. A cerebral journey that is very satisfying. Wonderful work, Steven.


  5. AJ
    June 27, 2014

    Thank you 🙂


  6. Pangolin
    September 4, 2014

    I love this essay’s marriage of rush and suspension–Bravo!


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