11 responses

  1. Christa Williams
    September 22, 2014

    This is absolutely brilliant. I fully understand the midnight-hilarity of being giddy with lack of sleep. And, after giving birth to 3 children, my husband can attest to this as well. Well written, and I am now going to look up more of your writing.

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    • bjhollars1
      October 19, 2014

      Thanks so much, Christa!

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  2. Marjorie
    October 16, 2014

    Never been pregnant but I still get it! Love the dialogue.

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    • bjhollars1
      October 19, 2014

      Thanks so much, Marjorie!

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  3. Jenny Cutler Lopez
    October 24, 2014

    I laughed. I cried. As a mom, I get the hilarity entrenched in exhaustion and the deep fears we all feel for our children (and not wanting to jinx the good times). And you captured it all in 750 words. Great writing!

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  4. Lela Michael
    January 2, 2015

    Brilliant line: “Even the clocks are asleep.”

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  5. Raymond Swanson
    January 8, 2015

    OMG I loved it soooooooooooo much!!!

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  6. Alexander Salamanca
    January 8, 2015

    That was the most entertaining story ive ever read in years. Thank You

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  7. Ryan Westmoreland
    January 15, 2015

    My husband loved this story.

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  8. BJHollars1
    January 15, 2015

    Thank you

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  9. Hector E. Gomez
    January 19, 2015

    B.J Hollars did a great job creating the scene and mood for his story, the dialogue was extraordinary, and helped shaped the story in your head!

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